Today we brainstormed all the things we wanted to write about in the future, and we came up with some really great ideas.
Today we dicided to write about the deep dark forest. The following are from some children who tried super hard and wrote amazing stories.
Dinosaur
I saw big feet in the jungle. His neck was higher. He was my friend. He put me on his back. I saw a small bad dinosaur.
By Junaid
The Haunted House
In a deep dark forest there was a big house. It looked like it was deserted so I went into the house. Suddenly some spikes popped up from the ground and a big flag came up. I heard some creaking floorboards. There was some music too. It was spooky. There was also a whole tomme of people there. They looked like pigs. Thery were friendly and the house was really big.
By Benji
The Secret of the Wings
A girl went into the forest. She saw a tree with some apples. She took a bite from the apple tree. Suddenly she felt something on her back. There were some wings on her back! She saw some footprints then she followed them. She saw a man. He was a wizard. She could keep the wings. She flew high and low and fast and all around different countries. She was so happy.
By Delaney
The Girl
The little girl is ging to be eaten by a dinosaur but the girl escaped. The little girl ran to the zoo and trapped the dinosaur in his cage. The policeman cam and put him in jail forever.
By Rory
The Forest
I was sleeping in my bed in the deep dark forest. I was scared because a goblin was in my bed. He got squashed my a trashy truck.
By Marcel
In a Deep Dark Forest
In a deep dark forest an egg cracked open. Inside was a little bird. She went to see her mother. She was scared of the dark.
By Oscar
In the deep dark forest it was cold and damp.with dirty leaves everywhere. The moon was shining , i thought it was my light? I heard a scary noise HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! IT WAS MY BROTHER FALLING FROM THE TREE !
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In the deep dark forest, there was a whistle in the trees which surrounded the forest floor. i could hear the owl hooting and the leaves crunching as i walked.But all i could see was a pitch black night,though the moon was shining bright above me.
ReplyDeleteas i walked deeper into the heart of the forest i got more and more scared, but the moon was guiding me .
By Bethany (Samuels sister )
hi room 3
ReplyDeletei enjoyed reading youre stories and hope that you do some more awesome work . i even tried doing one to !
Bethany Oxley (SAMUELS SISTER)
Bananas are yellow. Bananas are creamy inside. The banana taste sweet, it feels spongy.
ReplyDeleteI used a spell to spook you and heard you spilt a spongy spider on your friend.
Samuel
great work room3 from lucy
ReplyDeleteIn the deep dark forest I was looking for blueberries. I found a few. I took them home. I made them into blueberry jam, and used that jam for toast.
ReplyDeleteFrom Philippa
MMMMMMMMMMMMM! i started eating doughnuts then a bee wonted to join me.I ate ten. from samuel
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