Kia Ora
Today we have been learning about road safety with Constable Aaron Dann.
We went for a field trip along the road, looking for hazards.
Ask your child what a hazard is and what hazards we saw today.
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Room 3
Sunday 26 May 2013
Sunday 12 May 2013
Show, don't tell...
Hi everyone,
This week we are focusing on 'show, don't tell' in our writing. This means that the children have to describe an emotion to convey a picture with words, without actually saying what the emotion was.
See if you can tell which emotion we wrote about today.
My body was shaking like an octopus., My eyes were really big, like a goblin. My bike didn't have brakes. I couldn't stop it.
Charlotte
My legs were wiggling like a cat. My arms were shaking like a dog. When I was going down the hill on my scooter, I fell off.
Isla B
I was shaking. My eyes were as wide as giant circles. I was tumbling down a cliff on the back of my dad's bike.
Olivia
Once I was as still as a stone. I was hopping up and down. I gasped. My body had to calm down. I was about to go on a water slide.
Philippa
My scream was hurting my eardrums. My knees were knocking. My eyes were wide open. I gasped for breath. I was at my first swimming lesson.
Harvey
My arms were shaking. My hands were clenched around the handlebars. My eyes were as wide as a basket ball. I thought I felt blood dripping down my leg. The wind whistled up underneath me. I was on my bike, on a narrow bridge, high above the ground.
Caitlin
My eyes were open, as big as balloons. My arms were shaking. My fingers were shaking. My toes were wobbling like a wobbly tooth. My hands were stiff. My stomach felt like it had been hit with a pillow. It felt like my hair had been chppped off. I went down the water slide.
Isla Mc
This week we are focusing on 'show, don't tell' in our writing. This means that the children have to describe an emotion to convey a picture with words, without actually saying what the emotion was.
See if you can tell which emotion we wrote about today.
My body was shaking like an octopus., My eyes were really big, like a goblin. My bike didn't have brakes. I couldn't stop it.
Charlotte
My legs were wiggling like a cat. My arms were shaking like a dog. When I was going down the hill on my scooter, I fell off.
Isla B
I was shaking. My eyes were as wide as giant circles. I was tumbling down a cliff on the back of my dad's bike.
Olivia
Once I was as still as a stone. I was hopping up and down. I gasped. My body had to calm down. I was about to go on a water slide.
Philippa
My scream was hurting my eardrums. My knees were knocking. My eyes were wide open. I gasped for breath. I was at my first swimming lesson.
Harvey
My arms were shaking. My hands were clenched around the handlebars. My eyes were as wide as a basket ball. I thought I felt blood dripping down my leg. The wind whistled up underneath me. I was on my bike, on a narrow bridge, high above the ground.
Caitlin
My eyes were open, as big as balloons. My arms were shaking. My fingers were shaking. My toes were wobbling like a wobbly tooth. My hands were stiff. My stomach felt like it had been hit with a pillow. It felt like my hair had been chppped off. I went down the water slide.
Isla Mc
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