Thursday 6 June 2013

Our stories

Hi everyone,

Today we chose what stories we wanted to share on our blog out of all the stories we wrote this week.

We hope you like them and leave us a message about them so we know people read them.



Today Rory is coming to my house and we will play a game called gun game.
By Junaid

In the weekend I went to the slide with my sister and I laughed and liked playing with my sister. I had some fun.
By Oscar

We were driving in the car when there was a fight. My dad said, "Stop!". We continued on, but it was sorted out. It was fun driving.
By Philippa

When I went to the zoo we went to the giraffes. When we went to get an ice-block Carlos bit me. My mum said, "Carlos, you don't get an ice-block". Carlos was sad. I was happy that I got an ice-block. My ice-block tasted like strawberry.
By Hector

In the weekend I went to the pool to play monsters and after that I went home and I had hot chocolate. I had fun.
By Theo

I went outside.I took a step in the grass. Something was changed. I had a lot of flowers. There was only a little bit of grass. "Oh no! There is a castle next to my house!" There is a princess in the castle. Is it an evil princess? I am scared. She is coming out! I want a hug, but when she comes out, she wasn't a wicked princess afterall so I was safe.
By Delaney

My day was bad because my mum was leaving, but luckily my dad let me play angry birds. I stayed up late.
By Marcel

My name is Lightning. I'm a spy. I've been through lots of tornadoes and magnetors. Magnetors are a type of monster with a head like a bull and a body of a man. I've been through caves.
By Harvey

The other day my mum had an operation. The doctor put a sharp thing in her arm. She didn't even cry. She told me her blood was pruple!
By Riley

In the weekend I went to Junglerama with my friend Ashley. I heard people screaming. I smelt the slide. It smelt yucky. I tasted the air. I felt people touching my feet on the slide.
By Isla B

My house is getting painted today. The painters came over. There were three of them. It smelt disgusting. It was noisy when they were trying to get the old paint off. It was annoying! One painter said, "good morning". They all wore white shirts. I couldn't watch T.V.  I hope the new colour is worth all the bother!
By Isla McCaw

On Saturday I went to Kelly Sports.I had fun. I saw the penguins on the ice and I saw butterflies. I had a good week!
By Antara

I heard the wind whistling. The engine roared. You could tell that I was playing cars. I could feel the wheels going round. I could see the steering wheel moving from side to side. Playing with my cars is fun!
By Samuel

I went inside during the weekend. I ran to the garden. I smelt a plant. It smelt bad because it was dying. I ran in the house. I shouted to mum that a plant was dying, then mum followed me out to the garden to see the dead plant.
By Caitlin

In the weekend it was so dark that I couldn't see a thing. I was screaming with laughter. My mum was trying to cook as fast as she could. I was really excited! My dad was working on his computer until he saw something in the window. He jumped out of his chair with a big fright.  My friend arived. We had fun!!!
By Amelia

When I was getting dressed my brother was beating me up. I was shivering and shaking... I couldn't stop. He always does it. I couldn't breathe and my other brother does it too. My mum came along and said, "STOP!" Thank goodness for my mum. Afterwards, my mum gave me a lolly for being brave.
By Charlotte

When I went to the pool I played with my brothers and then we went home. We played tag in the dark.
By Paris

7 comments:

  1. Great stories Room 3 - we really like how you are describing everything & practising `show don`t tell`...!

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  2. Hi Room 3, we enjoyed reading your stories and we were so impressed with the great use of descriptive words, you must be so pleased with the great progress you have all made this year - Rachel & Greg

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  3. Alliteration
    Hi Room 3, we had a go at some alliteration using animals tonight while we had our dinner. I don't know room 3 do you think we need more practice?
    Dangerous, dirty, dying, dumb dinosaur (Can you guess who came up with this?)
    Pouchy, pouncy, patchy panda
    Cute, curly, cuddly cat
    Terrific, terrifying, ticklish Tiger
    Slippery, Slithering, scary snake ( Rachel & Co)

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  4. Snip the snail went for a snooze after a snack then went sneeze in the snow.
    Spelling words eveyone is nice.
    My best friend plays nice games.
    We heard a noise ,it was dad !
    Home-Work by Samuel, I love you Miss Finch.

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  5. Dear Room 3 I Like your storys. they were very good and in the weekend my dad's friend came over. Bye room 3 - see you tomorrow. By Amelia.

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  6. Hi Room 3...
    I must say you all are doing gr8 job . We enjoyed reading your stories.Keep it up !!

    Deepti(Antara's Mum)

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  7. Dear Room 3 Friends..... My mum said room 3 kids are good story writers. I love this classroom.
    By Antara.

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