Monday 16 July 2012

Stunning Starry Night

Today we wrote at least two sentences about the stars in the night sky. We brainstormed lots of interesting words that reminded us of stars, like jewels, treasure, gold shining, sparklers, glitter, floating lanterns, sunflowers, constellations and more.

We decided to take all our sentences and share them all because we did such a fantastic job that we couldn't choose just one person's work!

Stunning Starry Night

The stars glitter, shining gold from the dark night sky. Guojinwang 
The crystal stars glitter in the black sky. Charlotte
The stars are twinkling at me, shining in the black sky. Julia
The stars are glittering crystals, twinkling in the sky. Molly
The stars are yellow sparkling in the cloud's big sky. Rosa
The stars are like beautiful silver glittering lanterns, floating in the sky. Lucy
The stars are lanterns in the shining gold sky. Dylan
The stars are treasures, as bright as the sun. The stars very glittery constellations. Jacob
The stars are glittering lanterns, shining gold. Esme
The stars are like pictures in the sky, called constellations. The stars are like beautiful treasure, glittering and shining. Samantha
The stars are lanterns flying in the sky, crystals gleaming in the sky. Nico
The stars are glittering, yellow up in the sky. Hugo
The stars remind me of crystals and the colour yellow. Connor
The stars are the sun, just a bit further away. They're as sparkly as gold and as pretty as a lantern. Caitlin
The stars glitter and remind me of crystals and lanterns. James
The stars are golden lanterns floating in the sky. Emily
The stars are floating pictures called constellations. Pearl

What a fantastic job you all did today! I am most impressed with your descriptive language. Well done.

3 comments:

  1. I like everyone's first sentence.
    They are so beautiful.

    From Samantha.

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  2. Intersting poem


    Levi

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  3. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a great story I like the stars to (and im afrid of them).

    From Quinn in room 8

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