Hi everyone, we had a fantastic day yesterday at athletics. We decided to write acrostic poems where the title is written vertically. Enjoy!
At Athletices day
Talking at athletics day
Help, I can't run fast enough
Learning how to jump over hurdles
Empathy for the teachers
Talking to your friends
I showed empathy to others
Cool at Athletics day
Screeching when I jumped over the hurdles
Dads watched us.
A great day
Yay I won!
Rosa
At Hataitai park, we did athletics
The Teachers put us in groups
Hurling down the track
Learning sports
Eating our lunch
Trying our best
I threw the bean bags
Crashing down the track
Special sunny day
Dads and Mums helped us
At the end we walked across the bridge and back to school
Yay we won!
Emily
At Hataitai park
Trying again
Hard work
Leaping over hurdles
Egg and spoon
Teams together
I sprinted down the path
Concentrating
Some felt happy and tired.
Julia
At Hataitai park
Throw the vortex
Helping everyone
Leaping over the hurdles
Egg and spoon race was my favourite thing
Team work was the best
I worked really hard for my team
Quoits could go really far
Sun helped get big spirits
Down was never the right thing
At the end I had a great time
Yay it was awesome
Molly
At the grass, we did exercises
Trying our super hardest
Helping people
Leaping high
Eating our morning tea
Trying our good listening
I threw the vortex very high
Cones everywhere
Super hot day
Dad's and uncle's came
At the end we went back to school
Yay, we won!
Dylan
At the Hataitai Park
Try helping each other
How we do sports
Leaping like a lion
Eat our food
Talking to each other
I like doing the hurdles
Cross the field
Sliding across the All Blacks field
Dancing
After all the work we went back
Yay, we won!
Lucy
At Hataitai Park
Teams were called
Hurdles were fun
Loving it!
Excited like an emu
The quoits were cool
I lept like a lion
Children were everywhere
Sunny day
Dad's and mum's came to watch
Athletics is fun
Yay, we were all winners!
Pearl
Awesome day
Trees around us
Hot and hard
Love or like it
Exercise
Teams
I win
Children
School kids
Day
Across the bridge
Yay, I won!
Jakeb C
At the park
Trying to do everything right
How we do sport
Leaping over the hurdles like a kangaroo
Everyone is good at something
Teams go together
It's really very fun
Cool day
Should we have a drink?
Doing sports is fun
At the end we buddied up
Yay, we're the best!
Samantha
At Hataitai Park
Trying to help
Holding the vortex high in the air
Letting some go in front of you
Ending the race
Taking turns
I won
Coming first
Skated over the hurdles
Doing sports
Adding points
Yay, I've won!
Caitlin
At Hataitai Park
Teams together
Helping a kid
Leaping like a lion
Everyone excited
Trying to do the right thing
I threw the vortex
Cheering each other
Sunny, sunny day
Day is wonderful
A very smooth day
Yay, we are winners!
James
A cool day
Trying to win
Hi Hugo
Lots of games
Eating morning tea
Tired of playing
I had fun!
Courses are fun
Some of us won
Dads rock
And we do too
Yahoo!
Connor.
At athletics day
Try your best
Help your team
Leap over hurdles like a horse
Egg and spoon
Team up
I enjoy it
Catching up
Scattering fast
Dashing very fast
A very good day
Yay we are the champions.
William
At Hataitai park
Trying our best
Help, I'm not fast enough
Leaping like a lion over the hurdles
Eating our food
Teams rock!
I threw the Quoits very far
Clever thinking
Starting our best day
Dad's and mum's came
Athletics day
Yay we won!
Jacob D
At Hataitai park
Teams playing with each other
Helping the team
Love the games
Eating the food
Teaching the children what to do
I had fun
Cones everywhere
Sitting down when you are eating
Dads watched us
Awesome sunny day
Yesterday
Nico
At Hataitai park we had the athletics day
The vortex flew like a rocket
Hurtling down the track
Learning more things
Eating like a dog
Terrorising the track
I liked it
Connor went super fast
Sunny, sunny day
Dad and Mum came
A quoit flew
Yay my team won.
Esme
At Hataitai park we walked over a bridge.
The vortex is a ball that has a tail.
"Help! I'm not fast enough"
Leaping over hurdles like a kangaroo.
Eat our playlunch
Try our hardest
I liked the hurdles
Charlotte go! Charlotte go!
Sunny, summer day
Dad's and mum's came and helped
And then we went back
Yay, we are champions!
Charlotte
That is the end of our acrostic athletics day poems. Now we also have some very special news stories.
On the weekend I went to my friends house. I had fun and I liked it. We went home and we ate chicken.
Junior
Yesterday I went to the pool and after I had to do my swimming lessons. I got to go to the cafe and I got to have an ice cream.
Hugo
Thanks for eading our writing. We really appreciate it!
Ka kite ano from room 3
I love all these acrostic poems. Very imaginative and very clever. It sounds like it was a really fun day for everyone!. From Jo - Caitlin's Mum.
ReplyDeleteNi Hao Everyone! We all had lots of fun, didn't we? It was very cool. From Caitlin
ReplyDeleteWow Caitlin, how clever are all of you, what a fun way to write a poem! Sounds like you had a great day at athletics, well done you, from Aunty Lesley x
DeleteGreat work room 3! Those acrostic poems are fantastic! They are interesting too. All your stories are actually. Love, Samantha.
ReplyDeleteLoving Those acrostic poems I'm so impressed How we are Getting On so quickly
ReplyDeleteLove PEARL
I looooooooooove the poems Room 3. Love LUCY.
ReplyDeleteI just love reading your blog room 3. Keep up the good work! Janey (Lucy's Mum).
ReplyDeleteFantastic poems room 3. What great writers you are turning into!! Liz (Esme's Mum)
ReplyDeletefabulouso!! room 3, Esme
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